Pitch Slam – Team Stray Tats – Entry 10

Writing contests help aspiring writers get to that next level. These contests are tough, with stiff competition, and to make it through the preliminary rounds is something to celebrate. So, please help me celebrate with my very first critique partner, Diane Holiday! Her romantic suspense novel is so, so good and it deserves a home.

LUCAS HARGIS

Genre: Adult Romantic Suspense

Title: THE WAGER

Word Count: 83,000

Song: “Every Breath You Take” by The Police

Pitch:

Kate finally finds a man she can trust just as someone evil finds her. Kate’s unaware she’s the subject of a sick wager that will test her trust, and may wind up costing her life.

First 250:

Kate weaved through the crowded bar, ducking between tables to avoid servers loaded down with trays of sloshing beer. The bass thumped in her head and chest, matching her quick pulse. She paused halfway to the raised platform where the band was finishing a song. If she couldn’t get the singer’s attention, she’d look like an idiot. Or worse, he could ignore her.  At least it was dark, which would hide her reddening face.

She needed to get a grip. It’s not like the guy was Bon Jovi, though he might think so…

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